I will be honest with you I liked it up until about 1/4 of the way through. A great build up and crescendo of drums, woodwind, string and percussion then the bit after with the "melodic" oboe, trombone/french horn and picallo ( at a guess) without the percussion in the back ground seemed to let it down a bit. Then every now and again there was a brass note that really didn't make a huge difference to the piece. I really like the bits where you have used dramatic build up with the drums, string instruments and the woodwind as the melody but didn't like the "bridge " parts. One other thing, I didn't like the end, I would have liked to hear it end serenely rather than abruptly.
I'm not a musical professor or anything, so really my opinion means diddly other than I quite like orchestral pieces and believe that music played well can move even the hardest of people. So ignore me if you like

That saying, I couldn't do it, so all respect to you for making a great piece, and good luck with what ever you choose to use it on
Oh and welcome to TotalFormat! Would love to hear more if you have any
