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I took into consideration some of the points that were thrown at my last attempts... and now i read back through them i understand what most of you meant by them being sloppy.
I tried again and again, then came out with this.
I stare through the darkness, but your not there
I've laid down to rest, all you do is stare
The scars begin to bleed once more, This blood is so rare
My stomach's so sore, all you do is stare
I've cried a river, i've felt the fear
Inside i shiver, all you see is a tear
The darkness consume's me, i'm going insane
Please set me free, my life is a train
I'm spiralling out of control, can you feel my pain
You play an important role, my life has been slain
I've cried a river, i've felt the fear x2
Inside i shiver, all you see is a tear (This tear, 2nd time)
I've watched for too long, now i shall gain control
You think im wrong, this life's so cold
All you do is stare
It as you can see is along the same lines as my others, but hey im a depresssive person when i wanna be... then again i was listening to Stained at the time and i find them quite depressing... well more make me think.
A new song i wrote.
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