Its a blues song

[dgratiano]

this is about my first experience with Yoga , specifically Yoga Flying (check it out)
Its a little Blues song in the Works still

Wonderful dreams
Of archaic wings
Learning
to fly while still


this is this the ride , Here and Now
With you , without you
In that exact moment when universes collapse
And we become extensions of each other

You exhale ....
I am forever grateful that the moments pass
And just like moments do
They build up, peak, crumble and die.
And we are left hanging



You exhale..... ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh and
I yearn to hold you
Maybe a little longer
I question my presence in your absence
And ponder upon about my absence in your presence.
But im always there. Still ,
Shuffling temperatures colors and rhythms



I surf on a board of thoughts through waves of emotion ,
Looking for that perfect break
That is yet to come
Or is it gone?
That is yet to come
Or is it gone ?



You know sometimes I
just want to slip off the board
immerse my self thepassion ,

the passion which accompanies each and every moment I feel , think or hear your vibration



But Im scared. Not of letting go, but of knowing that incertitude will hover over And I will want to Ask

But I have no way of knowing if you'd be there to answer

[Bimbo]

Thats not a blues song. Blues songs are about the blues not the sort of rubbish in your song im afraid.

[DeathKitten]

that was a little harsh, bimbo O.O

but it really doesnt sound like a blues song. my dad listens to blues all the time ;o that sounds more like a rap song, or some modern poem

[Idle_hands]

Yeah i wouldn't stay it sounded like a blues song either.
I suggest you check out some real blues artists and see how they're lyrics run, like
BB King
Elmore James
Robert Johnson
Muddy Waters
Led Zeppelin's bluesy tracks.
Jeff Healey Band..etc

[Bimbo]

Originally Posted by DeathKitten

that was a little harsh, bimbo O.O

but it really doesnt sound like a blues song. my dad listens to blues all the time ;o that sounds more like a rap song, or some modern poem

I'm really sorry, that was harsh, my woman left me and it made feel mean. Id buy some liqure but I AIN GOT A BEAN. But I'm here every body knows I'm here....