[Sean]

I'm helping a band start a lil' prog project with there lyrics, meant to be kinda to the point of the story line, basicly random drunken sex > pregnacy > deciding against abortion > 'father' forcing a miscarriage

need advice on this start...they've got 2 vocalists....trying to be sikth like but hardly as technical, but there vocalists are atleast alright.

If i was to burn delicately against your lips,
[squeeze you] as those eyes meet mine;
you never did breathe as sweetly as i,
speak softer than i, so if i was to
[hold you down that last time],
may i take this last plunge?

Forced? [Loved you were, as we kissed],
nor the hand which stroked, or the love
we spoke of. you wanted this,
[oh so sweet, your taste]
the thing you withheld the most,
[stolen in a glance].

Guided my hand, yours in mine,
[places where we speak shortly of.]
misguided and influenced, [sweet liquids],
bringing chances for a long waited meeting.

[Ground zero], this is it, and i whisper,
"are you sure", thrusted without concern,
your hips [firmly into mine, oh mine], this is it,
ground zero....and i whisper..[scream].
"forgive me"

whiped clean in a morning blur,
the stains, [your naked skin next to mine],
as my eyes delicately burn against yours.